Wow, David, your poetry has really taken off big time. I haven't read for a while and I'm sorry for that. I have a long commute to work and am away from home for about 11 or 12 hours on weekdays. Not much reading/writing time anymore. But there was lots of joy and thought put into this. It reminds me of the saying: 'behind closed doors'. It is subtle and suspicious and includes a great sense of language and intrigue too I think.